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A One Night Killing

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/13/13

pretty good!

i enjoyed this story! will you do a sequel?

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by Anonymous07/17/13

slow down

A very enjoyable read, but slow down and build the atmosphere.

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by kiss_me1307/17/13

Thanks!

I get what you mean. I promise that my next story WILL be better! :)

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by Anonymous07/19/13

Yeah, the story was a little too short. But excellent writing and a great plot with a nice twist.

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