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leave us hanging...
Its good to finally see all of them get together. Excellent way to end this chapter with Natalie finding information about her dad. Just what are Andy and Jessica keeping from her? Will she get the one thing I think she wants more then anything else in the world. To finally meet her father and be reunited with her other sister. I hope for whatever the reason that they kept this information from her doesn't tear them apart.
Worst
series I ever read. It was so morbidly bad I had to read, or at least scan, it all, to see if it had any redeeming qualities. Zilch.
The secret
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MOAR! This is really good and I'm looking forward for more. I have an interesting theory as the the reason that the older siblings have a conflict/hesitation about their father. I can assume it has to do with the dream about Andy leaving Nat for one of his older sisters and/or quite obviously Nats` dream about her dad. I have a strange idea that the other sister and the relationship she has with their father will play a huge role in the story/plot. Namely incest and some intriguing secrets and blood-ties. I want to read it so bad! >.
A load of utter disappointment
One sister and one brother; that was all you needed. But no, we need to bring the other sister in. You did a great job ruining the story. As if the story wasn't bad enough to start with.
Really got into the story!!!
Great story...enjoyed all that was going on...hope there is more!
MORE
More
Sure hope for more!
Great story line...hope this is not the end...that you write more! Sure like your writing style and would like to see more of it.
Noooooooo!!!!
Why stop now? This is such a good series, why not continue? Please, continue this story and thank you for such a great read.
Please update
The story is so good. Please don't leave us at at a cliffhanger.
PLEEEEEASE CONTINUE
I beg you. It's been 3 years, I know, but i got off so many time reading this. It's the best story on Literotica.
My clit awaits the further adventures of your characters.
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