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My Roommate's Bitch Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by burnie443407/12/13

You just became a cocksucker.

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by stinson07/12/13

delightful story lov to here more ;-)

a dream I have ;-)

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by SumacandIvy07/12/13

Looking for More

The first part of the story works well, but now I expect more. I know there is more. It's a "If you give a mouse a cookie" situation.

Subtle and intriguing. Good use of detail. Nice going with the show don't tell. Time to write part two.

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by gomaco907/12/13

Tastes good

It's nice to have the taste of a cock and cum linger in your mouth so it can be savored. Tell us more.

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by ignorantslut07/12/13

fucking hot

while I never did that with one of my roommates. I did end up sucking one of his friends that always seemed to come over

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by chesthairslave07/12/13

different but good

I have nothing in my personal life to relate to the overall story, except the late part & Matthew's desire for more cock & cum.

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by Anonymous07/13/13

I suspect that Matt just got on a very slippery slope, and may not be able to stop from sliding down faster and faster.

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by Anonymous07/13/13

Bitch?

Liked the story, gave it a good rating.......but don't like that 'bitch' bit in the title. Hope this doesn't turn out to be one of those dominance-submission stories where the top fucks the bottom and says 'you love my c*ck don't you, bitch? say it'. No romance is ok(seeing as they're both straight), but don't try to turn up the heat with humiliation or the 'slut act'. There's a pile of that rotting in this website already.

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by Anonymous07/15/13

Lovedddd the story got me all hard.:)

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by Anonymous07/18/13

Amazing

Simply amazing hope there is more

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by DeeBee08/11/13

Hawt!

Slow start, but I'm glad I stuck with it - loved the action!

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by Bathernaked08/13/13

I'm heading down the same slope as Matt. Where will I end up?

Great story. Think my roommate will be getting a great bj tonight

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by lordshiva09/25/13

Nice

More please. I feel like there more to this story.

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by arrowglass12/10/13

MORE!

There has to be more to this story....! I can imagine sooooo much more!!!!

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by Anonymous03/06/14

yes

would love to have been him7e9d sucking dick

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