by FiveStarGenitals
Nice first time pick up story. For what it is, your story is well paced. Your writing is pleasant and smooth. However, you've given the reader no emotional connection with either Tony nor Glen. Creativity would also be welcome.
This is similar to my first time having sex with a man. I remember having only one regret------that I hadn't found out how good m2m sex is until I was 48. Since that night, I have not had sex with a woman and haven't wanted to. I truly think I was probably gay and just didn't know it until. I sucked a cock and got fucked