Best Man

Yo Ash

What kind of crap is this? The best man not only fucks the newlywed on her honeymoon night, but because the husband is still drunk he takes her on the honeymoon? Give all of us a break. Fix this somehow.

The epilog would be interesting

Humorous, but Mike could do an annulment for this marriage like in crious2c's story "Honeymoon Is Over". Very good scandal for a family and for the local community.
Sid0604's story "Chicken" is much more interesting, but there was felony as well, but the the young exgroom found a Second Chance woman..
In this sort of story this 1 page is the first chapter ONLY and that is the interesting, which was not written in more imagined 4-5 chapters.................

Yo bbl

fix it? Okay, he rolls up to your mom's house and goes down to the basement where you live, he drops trow, you smoke his cock, you drop trow, he buggers you proper, everyone lives happily ever after.

Yo Anon

Did you read the story? Did you rate it? Wait, I'm sorry. I forgot that your Pop keeps you so busy sucking the cum out of ass that you barely have time to clean the shit out of your before you get to sucking more. You buggered cornhole.

The only way for the groom to "fix" this...

would be through extreme violence. But I agree with bbl, this kind of incomplete cheating wife story seems to be primarily intended to piss readers off. Actually, all of this auther's stories seem to be intended to piss people off; evidently, that is what turns this author on.

Nothing erotic.

Just a story to piss people off, I skipped it, fuck you ash.

Now if there was an annulment and he married her - well ok. But if he just fucked her and returned her to the husband NOT OK.
In real life I had a friend that caught his wife fucking someone on their wedding day. They knew they were caught but he just walked away. Two hours later they found his body. Instead of killing them he put a bullet into his own head.
So I have a problem with this story but it was well written.

Yo!!! Anon and BBL re

Hey dumbfuck you comment on the comments and not on the story? What does that make you needledick? You can come out of your mothers basement now moron. BTW. Story as fiction was fair Highly unlikely but fair at best Not one of this authors better offerings

you can't turn a whore in to a housewife

and with friends and a wife like him who needs enemies. It seems to me that the best man was the divorce lawyer.

Ummm....very unrealistic because ..

Nobody in their right mind would go to Hamilton Island on their honeymoon unless it was at Qualia in which case you say Qualia not Hamilton. Hayman, Bedarra, Lizard and even Dunk if your on a budget but Hammo .... No way !

Listen All Douchebags

I read every tale. If someone comments about my comment I let them have it.
Ashson you're a decent author but this tale needs a sequel. In my first comment I said to fix it. Sequel, fix it, same thing. Now idiot anons just read the stories.

MAYBE BEING THE BEST MAN WAS OK

but as a Good Friend/Buddy....No Way would that pass any test, TK U MLJ LV NV

yeah....

I don't think the marriage OR the friendship could survive this level of betrayal. Luckily, I think they could have this annulled. Would a divorce even be necessary? As a marriage was never consummated? Man, it takes some FUCKED UP WRONG SHIT for a man to learn who his friends are, and what they are really about, huh!! I believe the cliché is that "with friends like these, who needs enemies?" I hope the financial bourdon for maintaining this bitch falls squarely in the hands of this so-called "best man". He stepped into a shit storm on the horizons of love for this one! BEH!

Same old, same old

The story line of the drunken bridegroom, virgin bride and johnny-on-the-spot best man (or other man in the party) is not new. This version went far too smoothly - although the bride was certainly ambivalent about it in the evening she had changed loyalties by mid-morning. The author certainly didn't give us any insight into these people's characters - the woman's was two-dimensional, as was the narrator's - motivations, anyone?

re: Same old, same old

"The story line of the drunken bridegroom, virgin bride and johnny-on-the-spot best man (or other man in the party) is not new."

I agree. This was written (if that word can really apply to this) by rote. I start all stories with a rating of 3. Ya have to earn a higher rating. Admittedly, knocking points off is easier, and a cliched story is gonna lose points. I read stories in this category on the hope I would find some thought or effort. I didn't.

what crap, the bride her wedding night goes off with the best man

and you call this a story, a sick story from you ASHON...

Terrible

This story sucked big time!

Not wake groom?

BullShit...after boffing Bride Bowser-style, pick up Groom with another Fireman's Carry and drop him in the shower and turn on cold water. Have Bride in there with him to clean herself off at the same time. Hubby WILL wake up! He might, later, be miffed that BestMan saw his Bride birthday-clad, but time was of the essence. Bride would, later, punish BestMan for her shivery shower by her own method(s)!

Oh, yes, the story was fast and cute, but also well-travelled. Not the usual intriguing off-course dash Ashson usually takes!

I usually don't like cuck stories, but this one is almost funny

Kind of like a Darwin survival-of-the-fittest - if the groom is dumb enough to get that plastered, I think we found out who the best man was. I agree with Duna, though - they ought to do an annulment and a new marriage.

yo bbl

English must not be your native language or you are the most illiterate nonce ever seen on this board and that is saying a lot.

Learn to write coherently before making any more feeble attempts to insult others in your comments.

An A for Prolific

An F for Monotony. I peg you as a man-hating woman singing the same note over and over again to get even.

Like I said before......

Every single Ashson story is ONLY written to piss the readers off. It is all just for shock value!

I'll be honest here. I used to like reading your stories but the last several have pissed me off badly. So you lost a reader here, but you don't really care since your just looking to piss people off. Don't worry this is one reader you won't here another peep out of!

no sense at all

This 'story' makes no sense whatsoever.

too funny

Pissing off the insecure dickless wimps who haunt this category is worthy of 5* - keep writing, plenty of readers viewing/favoriting so to hell with the eunuchs, damn the torpedoes, full speed ahead captain!

It probably was a very short marriage

I would imagine that Mike was a bit pissed when he found his best friend had taken his place on the honeymoon.

Thanks for the good read.

very disturbed by this story

If his wife was a slut the story wouldve made a lot more sense,however this is some very disturbing shit! The woman is still a virgin! A virgin taken by the husbands best man,friend,buddy! I'm more pissed off then anything else...really man fix ur shit pls.must all ur stories revolve around (forcing?). Damn I think this housewife fantasy is starting to make me sick

Good old Mike...

I hope Mike was waiting for them to get home with a machete in his hand. And would like to see that one was left a head shorter, the other two heads shorter, when he left.

Seems like readers are more interested

in insulting each other than giving constructive feedback. But then, what else is new. Lets just say, having never read this author, I'll never read him again. Not worth the time wasted reading anything he writes. 1* and that's also to piss off the guys that think this "dreck" is erotic.

sarcasm, humour, irony, and just a bit of retribution

the groom was a dumb f*&k for being a jerk at his own wedding.
The Best Man was just that, the Best Man. Caring, considerate, compassionate, and observant.
If the groom had not been such a a dumb f+^k he might have been present at his honeymoon.

response to digdaddyrich

Not at all to suggest that I condone cheating but the 'groom' had it coming to him as he willing decided to get so drunk that he became camotose, not caring about the fillings of his wife as it suggested by romance novels/movies etc that the husband tries to making their first night together at least toletable so that the wife doesn't feel like that she is unloved/ an important part of his life.

By freely and willing getting into a comatose state it suggests that he didn't give a dam about his wife on their weeding night of all events.

If the husband is willing to let himself to get into a comatose state on their weeding night, what assurances is their that he wouldn't doing frequently at a later date which could make the wife doubt why she even bothered to court with him.

Just my two cents.

PS: typing this on a phone is a PITA x100.

Frank must be a true buddy-

Not every man would step up to the plate and be the designated hitter! Frank is a real treasure, and I hope Mike realizes what a true friend he is, interrupting his own plans just to make Cecelia's wedding night and honeymoon a good memory for her... Gee, what a guy!

What a lot of bullshit...

This story was good being a fantasy of the bestman, but as a story it's bad...Because put the bride and the bestman as two low human beings...If the writer was trying to have a funny story, he failed...