Oh Fuck!!!

Great

Short, sweet and to the point, she got what she deserved.

loved it

he was calm, cool, collected, and utterly devastating

he took no prisoners, and turfed her ass out of his universe

bravo :)

It Takes Two to Tango

This story just goes to show the other party in an affair may not have all the bases covered. All I can say is shit happens and she got everything she deserved for being a cheating SL_T. Well written. Thanks for a possible real life scenario. Short and oh so sweet.

OH YEAH

That's what you get for cheating on a faithful spouse and your family. Let's call a slut a slut. Fucking cunt. Excellent.

Well written but way too short.

Great story, well written. Good to see that the husband was not a wimp as is the case with most stories out here. I wish it was a bit longer in which he gets more revenge on the wife. Hope there is a part two that fulfills the need.

Loved it

Well written and actually a bit poignant.

Good first chapter

Chapter Two, the afterlife of a caught cheater. How people treat a cheater who threw her family away for her ego.

Excellent Read

Loved the confirmation. Fascinating analysis of power twisting all whatever the gender. She feared no one but the palace fell down on her.

Excellent Story!

Really good writing style. Us readers love dialog rather than the narrative any day of the week. If written as a complete story you should consider another chapter where you can flesh out the husband and kids. Really enjoyed it thanks

Concise and well written

Just the right length and no need for a second chapter. Nice work

Great Story

Well written, I enjoyed the story. Keep the good stories coming.

A FF story. A Fun Five.

the idiot that wrote

about customs and seeing the kids, this is a story, you must be fun at parties, people like you make people sick until something happen to you it is not importance. As far as the story goes it was a good read and if it was true good for him.

Loved it

Great ending

Nice

That's what a woman says when she means Fuck You. Well Nice is what she got. LOL

DITO betrayedbylove !

CINCO ESTRELLAS

I gave it 5 stars...

... Not a BTB story but you can smell the smoke. A well written story, believable both in character and plot.
To Anonymous please read the 2 paragraphs in quotation then promptly enroll in a reading comp course.
"Helen was acutely aware as a lawyer that, in the event of her marriage breaking down and them getting divorced, John would receive substantial alimony from her as well as child support. He would undoubtedly get custody of the girls and as the main care (giver), would also be allowed to keep possession of their beautiful home in the royal borough of Windsor. Despite all this, she still felt safe in her adulterous behavior."
And.
‘"I want you out of here before I bring the children home. I've packed most of your things in suitcases and taken them to your parents house, you can arrange with them to pick the rest up when the house is empty."’
At no time in the story is it claimed that he is a “PERFECT husband and father”. Just that; THEY were in love, the sex between them was good and he was the main care giver for the children. Nothing is written about visitation with the children. Why are you angry over his actions and not her’s? It would seem she knew what she had and she risked and his response was well measured. Question: Are you a member of the Tea Party?
Panther Fan.

DAMN!!!!!!!

#TrueOhFuckMoment
#ServesHerCheatingAssRight
#Five StarStory

Awesome!!!

Loved it

I hope you put out a part two

BTB central

Just a tad off

As a lawyer she should have known, look, then speak. She assumed it was her last lover. Oops!
All in a good shorty. Keep 'em comin'!
Thx

A LONG TIME AGO THE "OH SHIT" WAS A DAMNING EXPLETIVE

I believe the "OH FUCK" has superseded it. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great

Nice complete little story. It didn't keep you hanging like a lot of short stories. Thank you

Nice and to the point.

What a dumb lawyer . Loved her family but loved cheating away from home. No winners just money awarded and heart break.

No, No, No....

There was NO flaw in the plan! It COULDN"T fail, could it? What? Self destruct my marriage? Hell No! I'm much too careful for.....too smart, and , ugh...ugh.. oh well FUCK! Cheater's never think of EVERYTHING! But at least for now she'll be able to fuck whatever she wants. She should be happy now. May be?

Wonderful!

Like the ideal length of a lady's skirt. Short enough to be interesting, but long enough to cover the subject. An extremely well written and enjoyable story.

Also a valid reminder of the hard truth well expressed long ago, "If you're gonna play, be prepared to pay."

5*****

I prefer the longer epiloge stories with second chance women, but the story text showed the future well.........Special thank an European wrote this.

Yes, If she belongs to the 15%.

@ Anon The 85% of the women are children centered, if the children custody is not theirs (at the 85%) that is a true revenge (Romantic Revenge) with two fasis. The second fasis will be, when the the children will be teenegers and will understand why they lives with the Dad.

Yes 15% of the women are not children centered. I call them low IQ fembots. If somebody read SciFi@Fantay stories High IQ fembots want to be step Moms!!!

OK

Now this is very good. Shprt, sweet, to the point and NO discussion. Great way to deal with the issue. Thanks

A very good 5* effort!

Will have to check out your other stories.

a very good read!

I don't know whats going on with your no british comments as I have high regard for the british. you guys stand by us in many wars etc...kudos to you sir!

It ended

As it should.

A good flash story

Quibble...it was HER room she used. How did the balcony door get open, and how did the PI know where to set up? Minor quibble...how did Paul's Wifey get Sweetie's name and address? Top-flight hotels don't have clerks to whom you can slip a Benjamin! Especially for regular repeat customers! The PI would not have tried that at the time, since passing the info along was Wifey's decision sometime later!

Details! They'll eat you alive!

4*

Part 2

Sorry folks - there ain't gonna be a part 2 to this story (not from me anyway) - She was an unrepentant, seriel adulteress - her husband had irrefutable proof and showed no inclination for forgiveness - Game Over as far as I am concerned ( and, after all. it is MY story LOL)...
Judging by the number of reads for this offering in just 24 hours, it would appear I am getting a small following for my stories - Great to see people and thankyou to one and all.

Oldie.

Thanks!

Short, sweet and realistic. Well done,

Good Read****

Everyone wants a little on the side. Maybe her Ideal man was not a house husband?

Short and simple

A nice clean tale. Not that exciting but the emotions seemed fine up to the end. Didn't seem right for her to curse that way but that is probably my own response coming through.

To the person quibbling about details: there was plenty of opportunity to link the two. This went on for several days, so he could follow them to her room and then set up. After that,the pi could follow her to the company meetings since knowing who she was might help with the divorce. From there he could find someone to ID her. As a bigwig in a multi-national, she would not be hard to track down even if no one gave her up. Google image search might be enough if he got a shot of her face and knew where she worked.

Good Short Story

This story can easily be lengthen to be a more detailed informative story.

No Chapter 2 required -

It could be a good read but your point is clear and irrefutable - she knew she was fucked and he had her dead to rights with no inkling of forgiveness or reconciliation by him it is over but for the tears -

She might do better next time - assuming there was a next time for business woman of her renown - true love is rare and she threw it away for a fuck -

A classic zinger at the end

O'Henry would have been proud of the surprise ending. Bravo.

Bada Bing Bada Boom!

And the cheater gets her due. Not much else to be said. Good one.

she was fucked in more ways than one, people in that position cant afford divorces

her career is about to go into a nosedive

The problems is he cannot pack her bags and throw her out!

We all know that it has to go thru the courts and that take months unless they come to an agreement. Her adultery will have no bearing on the outcome , he we get the most out of it since she make a ton of money, the children unless over 12 will go with her .

Very good flash story

IRL both would move on and the kids would sort of adapt but likely have problems. Credible scenario.

Excellent

Fucking worthless cheating cunt. She was a real stupid loser. I'll get to that long tale soon enough;

oh fuck!!!:

she got caught like a stupid bitch

THE OH FUCK LINE

is more descriptive than O Shit. TK U MLJ LV NV

for those that think the wife always get custody

this is not true. i have an aunt and uncle that divorced. my aunt found out that her husband had been seeing a younger women for years, even had a child with her. jared (POS uncle) got custody of their son and kept the house.although the house had been bought by his family. he had a good lawyer, his family has a lot of money. my aunt has to pay child support to him. he doesnt work so she has to pay alimony also.his family has millions yet she had to pay fucking alimony and child support.to me if you get divorced its more about who can afford the best lawyer.

Very, very good.

The only holes I saw were - With all of Wifies precautions, how did the other (cheated) wife know where to send the damning evidence? I guess the PI unearthed her real name because she used her hotel room? And why did cheated wife's PI photo Wifey with someone else?
Tags: Needed a few more. interracial? anal? house husband? others?

Thanks

Pure & Simple...Short, to the point and a pleasure to read.

2ndThoughts