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Quick Flash - His Fourth of July Ex

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by Anonymous07/14/13

not believable

A girl admitting she was wrong for bad-mouthing her boyfriend? Sure, whatever you say.

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by Anonymous07/14/13

Enjoyable but Rather Illogical

Well-written and very readable I thought. Since she's going to badmouth him again it was a bit pointless-he's hardly likely to put up with it and he's clearly a desirable guy so he'll have no trouble replacing her with someone who isn't a nasty bitch.
The past tense of 'spit' is 'spat' NOT 'spit'.

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