A decent enough story. It was reasonably well written and I liked liked the age difference between the participants. It is fairly rare older men are portrayed as being "capable."
The first sentence warned me off. The last sentence was so rushed and out of breath, it makes no sense. Not much interest in what's written between. Widower eight years? Were you a cuckold in real life, or is this your fantasy? The woman you might find with this offering will not be so much a companion as an abuser.
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Anonymous08/18/13
Very hot!
You wrote it well, no shortcuts. Like the idea of an older man taking charge of a willing couple. The strange feeling when the older guy knows he's in charge and you accept it. Please, continue.
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Anonymous12/10/14
she should have been sandwiched! especially if her ass was virgin.
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A decent enough story. It was reasonably well written and I liked liked the age difference between the participants. It is fairly rare older men are portrayed as being "capable."
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The first sentence warned me off. The last sentence was so rushed and out of breath, it makes no sense. Not much interest in what's written between. Widower eight years? Were you a cuckold in real life, or is this your fantasy? The woman you might find with this offering will not be so much a companion as an abuser.
Very hot!
You wrote it well, no shortcuts. Like the idea of an older man taking charge of a willing couple. The strange feeling when the older guy knows he's in charge and you accept it. Please, continue.
she should have been sandwiched! especially if her ass was virgin.
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