Cute premise and presentation. Another example of "man has two heads, but blood enough to service only one of them at any one time."
On the other hand, I didn't like the feminist attitude, and the chauvinist presentation
I tend to agree with the first commenter's remarks.
The story is a good read but looking deeper into it the description of what a man might do to get what he wants overshadows the description of what a woman might do to get what she wants.
I had a feeling of amusement tinged with disappointment; amusement at the way both parties seem to be happy to allow in turn their brains and then their egos/libidos govern their actions, and disappointment that the balance between male and female was lost by portraying the female chiefly as victim.
What this story does is serve as a reminder that, no matter what each gender might seem to tend towards, there's not much difference between the selfishness and compromise that each is willing to relish if their actions might result in a loss more than a gain.
Before going swimming with da fishes.
Out Fox the Fox without a scratch being made. Good read Thanks for sharing.
Well done on this. Justice is served.
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