All In The Family Ch. 01

Trash

Unbelievable trash... This line got me to almost stop reading immediately...
"with a bigger ass but smaller tits. 42Cs is still really good in my book though." 42C is smaller? What, is this a family of cows???

Only thing this story missed was a 12" dick.

garbage

This I agree with the other comment is garbage at best. Doesn't know the very first thing about basic language sentence structure, beginning most with lower case letter is the first proof.

re: garbage & trash

Hardly surprising, Look at the URL. It lists the story as all-in-the-family-ch-01-7. That means there are six other stories with the same cliched title. That was a pretty good indication of how much effort went into writing the story.

Get a fucking editor

or learn how to use spell check.

thank you nice start i liked it