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Silver Kitsune Clan 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/15/13

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Did it get cut off again, because it stopped at weird place, and short. Love the stories looking forward to more.

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by redlion7507/15/13

still dont like mari leaving the pack especially with the pups on the way. the future alpha being raised by another family after loosing his other family is just wrong.

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by maxd0107/16/13

@Redlion75

I understand your view but I do have a reason for it. I have a feeling you will get a good laugh when all is eventually revealed... I have to admit I am having to much fun with this story and Mari is not his mate and never will be. I have a chapter or two of Geoff and Mari before I return to Dan's story. It needs to be told since before I can continue Dan's story Mari's story needs to be expanded.

She is in her own way as damaged as Dan is and with the Silver Kitsune stories her side is going to be told as well as how she deals with having Geoff as her mate. On her own she is a sort of complex person and deserves her own story. I do appreciate all the feed back you have given me. I do hope you enjoy what I am going to do with Mari and how she deals with her past. If you want please don't hesitate to drop me an e-mail.

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by Rheamistress07/16/13

After reading your comment to Redlion, I have to say I am looking forward to reading more of Mari's story and of what is to become of the pups. Something tells me that the pups will play a very important part in all of this. :)

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by Ebronco196807/18/13

Arrrgghhh!

And yet another very well written and creative piece of work that I now have to wait expectantly for each and every friggen chapter to be presented to us! I really hate you at the moment mxd01.. I will be appeased if you follow up with more of the same quality chapters quickly! :)

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by maxd0108/23/13

For all concerned

I did just submitt the next Silver Kitsune clan chapter and I hope you like it. I am hoping it will be up by early middle next week.

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by NymphWriter09/02/13

Geoff & Mari

I love it!!! Their story shows how much Geoff cares for the damaged Mari & how he will do what he can to prove to her he loves her & won't hurt her. 5*s is just not enough for this amazing series!!!

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