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and like
a hexagon of terror
she plops into the pond
(see preceding poem)
less write, more thought, more comments todski
i got to the end before you did, i.e. predictable
5ed but just so you get used to it
nicely done
the precipice is obviously a metaphor for decision
thanks erectus, yes it was about a decision.
thanks for the smile 1201. I was going to put a flippant remark that we were actually out bunjee jumping and she was scared of heights hence the tears, however I didn't allude to any of that so how would you know?
(above comment is for joke only, this piece is tired and predictable as stated)
falling.....
A good piece but slightly cold and unemotional for the subject. You're really showing progress todski, well done.
If you guys keep up
the compliments I am actually going to start thinking I might be good at this stuff :-p
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