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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/15/13

I wish I could be more specific, but...

...in every way I can think of, meh.

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by Anonymous07/15/13

Get some help and advice with Editing!

Example - use the right words.
Example -
"I like that dress. It compliments you well". I very much doubt that the dress is able to speak!
Compliment - 1) an expression of praise, commendation or admiration
2) a formal act or expression of civility, respect, or regard
3) a courteous greeting; good wishes; regards
Complement - 1. something that completes or makes perfect
2. the quantity or amount that completes anything
3. either of two parts or things needed to complete the whole; counterpart.

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by ReiDeBastos07/15/13

A nice beginning, but Get an Editor!

You have a problem with homonyms, The aforementioned compliment/complement, as well as several instances of using "to" instead of "too" (to much, to bad, etcetera).

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