All Comments on 'Yacht vs Motor'

It was better than your last tale.

That's it.

I like what BBL wrote.

I hate rich, pompous, pretentious assholes almost as much as cheaters (actually, probably more) so the near rape episode is a satisfactory payback in my book...

Still, you aren't learning to stay in the same person in your story telling.

The premise of your "tale" is that yachts do not have motors. Most do so the whole story falls apart. You didn't develop the wife as a character. She was going to swim for it either way so why would she fuck Frank? Just another slut who cant say no to any cock.

We, who sail, always refer to motor driven boats as 'stink pots'. Sailboats do have motors and I've towed in over a dozen ' bobbing corks' when their motors failed. Think before u write. 1*

I always read stories about "boating" and yours was enjoyable, even if not realistic. It relaxed me and made me forget about the work which needed doing.

By the way: you ought to learn to spell "jewelry"

Hah!...apparently Ashson struck a powerful chord between Yacht vs Motor. The disdain and hatred between the two appears to be very real! Can't we all just get along?

Happily getting away with cheating, sans respect (not to mention love) for your husband, is your one note, ad nauseum. I wish you would try a different theme.

As usual your story puts a smile on my face. Thanks.

NOT a near rape at ALL. Sweetie was told what the choices were...swim for the becalmed yacht immediately (staying true to her asshole - oops - man!) or swimming to the yacht AFTER a consensual fuck and scam on her asshole - oops - Hubby! She liked the 'swim later' option, even before a very serious rogering and orgasm! Bonus time! I liked the hole - oops - whole thing just fine! And Sweetie got to forego the traditional 'après-cheating' shower, thanks to the nice swim!

The editing could use some attention!

5*

A cheating cunt that needs to sleep with the fishes.

the guys wife is as much of a piece of shit as is her husband. Adultry is adultry

I enjoyed the story because it was possible to visualize what it could have been with further polish. Yet working in tandem with a good editor would have raised this to sublime/ subversively delightful range. The class warfare & rich twit bit was a excellent comic theme to offset the adultery.

Author has talent but needs refinement to make next step up.

Forget the details, great story line and plot. Your best story yet IMO.

Chilly

This POS should be in the NonConsent/I'm a self-righteous asshole rapist section.

You switched voice halfway through with no reason or explanation. Take a writing class, and get some psychiatric help, not necessarily in that order.

It was Donald Trump! LOL!

Seriously funny. Brendan is a pussy. You made me chuckle.

As a yachtie I must say that motorboats are most beautyful while burning! Nooooo!!!! Really just kidding!!! The "rivalry" between motorboaters and sailors sometimes isn't just a joke. I like your story very much, because Donald....Oooops...nooo... Brandon got what he deserved. An asshole like that begs on his knees to be punished!

I didn't go checking more recent stories to check if the problem persists, but the change in voice from 1st person to 3rd person with no warning or break part way through suggests an editor would be helpful.

Other than that I didn't mind the story. The Anon from 7 years ago who started his comment with "Rape for Revenge" should read the story again. She was given the option and made her choice.

That’s why I have a Scully Oar