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Empire Of Pleasures Ch. 01

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by Anonymous04/10/06

Very Dark

Very dark erotic story. A bit dark for my liking but still the writing is extremely powerful. It leaps out of the pages practically.

Thanks

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by Anonymous10/26/06

damn

have you been published?

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by 10/26/06

Fantastic

and very dark. I loved it.

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by Paul Lucas11/08/06

Thanks!

Actually, I have been published. I've been a freelance writer for 13 years, and have had my first novel, the science fiction adventure CREATURA (ISBN: 0-7599-3947-0), published this past year. In fact, that's why I haven't been able to finish EMPIRE OF PLEASURES; I've had to concentrating more on novels that can actually earn money, and sadly, as fun as writing erotica can be, it don't pay the bills.

But thanks very much, and I'm glad all of you liked the story.

--PL

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