Gosh!

This is so nasty!!!

It's great! lol

Can't wait to read chapter 2 lol

I've read this story about 5 times

...always makes me cum - what's wrong with me lol

lol

funniest shit ever. god thats the stupidest person ever to live.

LOL

"They look like letters. I wish I could read. Oh well."

rofl I laughed so hard my stomach hurts.

-Danielle.

wrong category

The only reason I'm giving you a rating this high is because it would have been a great story for the non-consent/reluctance group. It is not funny. At all. Incest, rape, and humiliation of a girl that is obviously slow just didn't jolt my funny bone all that much. And it's pretty disturbing that there are others that find this amusing. I suspect you are one of those authors that delete negative feedback, because I can't imagine that I'm the only one that found this offensive in the humor/satire category.

Reality Check

Not only were readers warned at the beginning that this was not to be taken seriously, the blurb for this story describes Gosh! as 'Completely unrealistic stupid and naive girl used and abused'.

No matter under which category this story appears, it doesn't take away from the fact that it is utterly unrealistic, almost to the point of science fiction.

'Bimbo/slut' IS a subsection of the 'humorous erotic literature' category (see the BimboTech series and many many others) and this story fits that category, even though I agree that Gosh! is not hilariously funny. However, most people seem to like it as it has consistently rated around the 4.5 mark. Go figure. I guess all those folks read the disclaimer, eh?

And I haven't had to delete any comments of this type because most people realise that this is an erotic FICTION website, where, on occasions, one has to suspend one's disbelief in order to enjoy a story.

SN

Awesome!

How can you not take this story seriously, man? This is seriously hot and creative and fun erotica. Laughing and cumming...what could be better! I want to read Cindy's *weekly* adventures in and out of school.

Stuff

very well written.

lol wtf did i just read

felt bad for her :( but why can't this happen to me and my football buddies? lol

OMWOW!!

I think I went to high school with this girl! j/k. LOL. So funny and lite. Thank you Sir Nathan!

Yea, what did I just read. Sounds like this girl might be slow and for her own step father to set this us. I did not enjoy this read at all. Sir Nathan I don't know where your head is but this was not nice at all.