Loved it! Great fantasy of mine, having a submissive slut at my disposal. Keep writing.
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Anonymous07/16/13
Barley...
I was barley getting into when it stopped. I did like it and one of my fantasies is also being with two men at one time so I would like that to continue and see if it happens for her.Good short read you should do a small series. *wink wink* Very good...please write more...
A good first part of a long story....that's how it seemed to me. Only you didn't put 'Part 1' at the top! Please don't leave it, and us, there...this is a springboard to a good tale of a young girls sexual journey....please!
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Loved it! Great fantasy of mine, having a submissive slut at my disposal. Keep writing.
Barley...
I was barley getting into when it stopped. I did like it and one of my fantasies is also being with two men at one time so I would like that to continue and see if it happens for her.Good short read you should do a small series. *wink wink* Very good...please write more...
Boring!
This is wild in your book? Okay.........
OK...first story...
A good first part of a long story....that's how it seemed to me. Only you didn't put 'Part 1' at the top! Please don't leave it, and us, there...this is a springboard to a good tale of a young girls sexual journey....please!
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