All Comments on 'The Adventures of Futa-Girl 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A tiny mistake, but wicked hot! Moar please

Awesome!!! Keep going! Can't wait to hear more!

hahahaha, but friend, archaeologists study the material history of humans, not dinosaurs :D. It's a common mistake, but what you're thinking about is a paleontologist. I had to laugh, because I'm an anthropologist, and we joke about how everyone thinks that archaeologists study dinosaurs. It's not a hang up though, and doesn't get in the way, just a detail. either call her a paleontologist or better yet, say she found some old Homo or Australopithecus remains :). Makes me happy to see archaeologists alive and well in the world of erotic fantasy.

great story though. love the idea. and wicked hot. love a good futa! please publish moar soon!!! :D

FinchleyFinchleyalmost 11 years ago
Another small mistake

I was going to make the same archaeologist/palaeontologist remark as the previous guy, but instead I'll just say that irradiating with gamma rays will never make an object "hot". They behave just like X-rays. Anyway, as you aren't exactly trying for believability I won't let it affect my vote score! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

exelent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
funny and interesting

Keep on coming...pun intended. I want some more.

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesover 9 years ago
The start of something good.

You really set up some great characters. I'm looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Archaeology versus Paleontology

Archaeologists don't study dinosaurs. Paleontologists study dinosaurs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good

I liked the story. Full of action

Also gotta second the comment on how archaeology doesn't involve dinosaurs. It's only humans. Nice work everywhere else, though.

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