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A tiny mistake, but wicked hot! Moar please
Awesome!!! Keep going! Can't wait to hear more!
hahahaha, but friend, archaeologists study the material history of humans, not dinosaurs :D. It's a common mistake, but what you're thinking about is a paleontologist. I had to laugh, because I'm an anthropologist, and we joke about how everyone thinks that archaeologists study dinosaurs. It's not a hang up though, and doesn't get in the way, just a detail. either call her a paleontologist or better yet, say she found some old Homo or Australopithecus remains :). Makes me happy to see archaeologists alive and well in the world of erotic fantasy.
great story though. love the idea. and wicked hot. love a good futa! please publish moar soon!!! :D
Another small mistake
I was going to make the same archaeologist/palaeontologist remark as the previous guy, but instead I'll just say that irradiating with gamma rays will never make an object "hot". They behave just like X-rays. Anyway, as you aren't exactly trying for believability I won't let it affect my vote score! More please!
exelent!
funny and interesting
Keep on coming...pun intended. I want some more.
The start of something good.
You really set up some great characters. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Archaeology versus Paleontology
Archaeologists don't study dinosaurs. Paleontologists study dinosaurs.
Good
I liked the story. Full of action
Also gotta second the comment on how archaeology doesn't involve dinosaurs. It's only humans. Nice work everywhere else, though.
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