You could have taken out the first 2/3 of your story and worked on developing the scene instead. You ranted about racism which could have been covered in one short paragraph because it didn't contribute much to your story line. The scene could have been about a couple of any race.
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You could have taken out the first 2/3 of your story and worked on developing the scene instead. You ranted about racism which could have been covered in one short paragraph because it didn't contribute much to your story line. The scene could have been about a couple of any race.
In my opinion.........
You could use a good therapist.
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