A Demon's Desire

EXCELLENT

I hope this is the beginning if a series! I really enjoyed it :3

Good start

You have me hooked.Will be looking for future chapters.

I absolutely loved this story!

Hooked me again!

Loved it and can't wait for more. 5 stars from me. :-) Please continue soon, but don't neglect "The Wolf's Captive"...It hooked me on your writing first after all, and I'm still anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Great looking forward to the next chapter

Love the writing...looking forward to more on both series :)

Wonderfully compelling!

Please, oh please, post more of this story. It is intense and marvelous and I am in agony waiting for more!

Oh my!

I want to read more of this!

Intense Heat

This one's a keeper! Please continue with this story... you paint the scene so well I'm just tingling all over!
I love how Natasha isn't allowed to peek... really adds to the thrill and suspense.

Grrrr! Want More Please!

I can't believe that we have had to wait so long for chapters to both your stories. It's been last July for chapter 2 for this one and last September for chapter 5 for The Wolf's Captive. Please hurry up and continue with both of them. Don't leave us hanging here.

Not Ch 1

Way too short to be a stand alone, yet, you did not label it as Ch 1??

Yikes

I just read this on the bus, realise that may not have been my best idea in retrospect *fans heated face* *crosses legs* please do continue.

story is on Amazon under 'The Demon's Lady' by Anais V

Hi, I completed and edited the story and it's on Amazon under 'The Demon's Lady' by Anais V.

It will be free from 1-3 feb so if anyone from Lit wants to check it out you can get it free.

Amazon is a bit more user friendly to submit to than Lit and I wanted to try my hand at publishing plus it's easier to read in one big go rather than in sections!

thanks!

Oh No Please not Amazon!

It's alright for those who have Kindle, but what about those who don't? I have no idea about how to go about getting it, or even if I can. It took me two years how to figure out to leave a comment on here. All this new fandangled technology goes straight over my head. Please, oh please think again about posting your story here. You'd get a lot more readers, if it was on Lit.

Hi, you can download Kindle for free to your pc/laptop, it really is more user friendly than reading on lit for me personally, especially the submission process.

I enjoy lit but wanted to try my hand at self-publishing. I had it for free on Amazon over the weekend (Amazon only lets you put it up for free for limited periods). I will try and list it for free again if anyone from here wants to read it for free

It's also on Smashwords which has pdf, word etc download options

Technology, So confusing!

I tried downloading kindle, but it didn't work. I have no idea what went wrong. I told you that me and technology do not mix. I guess I'm going to be one of the unlucky ones, and will never get to finish this story. :(

I will still keep this story on my favourites list and hope that sometime in the future you will change your mind, and finish your story here on Lit. I won't hold my breath though. I'll probably give it a year, and if there still isn't a chapter 2, then I'll delete it. :(

Hi, sorry it didn't work. You can send me a message via the feedback link (if you click on my name it will take you to my profile and a contact section) and I will be happy to help you out

I won't be uploading the rest to lit since I edited and re-worked the story so it won't make much sense if I attempt to submit it in parts, it'll be a bit of a headache!

LOVE

I am dying to read more! I might just have to download the kindle app and pay for it!

I've only just discovered this story now and was searching desperately for it on Smashwords with no results so I was wondering if you'd had it removed from there?

hi anon, send me a message through feedback and I'll send you a free copy

Uhhh I just realised you've got the book out, I really need to read the comments more often. I was kinda wondering if you were gonna finish it :) YAY :)

Amazon sucks thou as certain books are not available for purchase in the region I'm in :( But I found another link for it on Smashwords and I can get it from there...WooHoo!!! Thanks for letting us know :)

GRRR!

I should really start checking to see if a story is complete before i read it.. i hate cliffhangers lol please continue soon!

Link for the full version please?

could you give a link to the full version on smashwords or Amazon? I'm really interested in your writing and I would like to read it.

@ anon, send me a message and I'll email you a code

The Full version of it please?

That's it?!? just when it was getting good it stops/ends...

seems like u have uploaded only the start of the story. which is a bummer as it was really interesting and would love to know how it would have developed for both the characters.

Full story :)

This so good, that I could find full story on amazon. Thank you it is a very pleasurable read :)