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Great short story, as usual your writing is great. It flowed smoothly giving enough detail to make the story well rounded for its length! Thanks.

truly stupid

Harrison COULD be arrested and spend several years in prison IF the idiot woman changes her so called Mind and decides to file charges . Maybe it is just me... but there is NOTHING erotic about the glorification of dangerously unstable stupid women .

non consent

For anyone who says there is nothing erotic about this should not be reading in the non consent story section. This category is for people that think its hott. Great story please keep writing. You've got me soaking wet waiting for my hubby to come home

Nicely done

You did a great job of quickly building the characters and creating a tightly crafted believable story. My compliments on the quality and your expertise.

very interesting take

but Harry she isnt even close to the only stupid one and u show ur bigotry if not misogynistic ignorance by blaming her for the trouble.

wonder if a peson can actually chang thier strips as quickly as he did

Very nice

Its always great to find a short piece that is FULFILLING. You always do excellent work, and it is great to see you switching things up. Every new series is different, special, and always super hot.

Be careful what you wish for

Sometimes words you say can come back and bite you in the ass. Great job Enjoyed this submission.