Hi, I read Robin Baker's "Sperm Wars" many years ago and always thought many of his short anecdotes could be the bases for hot Literotica stories. I'm glad I stumbled on this one and I hope you intend to follow the characters' adventures! I guess
I'll have to go back and read the earlier stories, but this one stands up well on its own.
The Todd and Melina series was a good read, good plot and hot. The Interludes were a jumble of having 20 people just fuck anyone in sight. It just doesn't fit. The behaviour of the wife in Zygote is beyond redemption I would be giving her walking papers. I guess I'm saying the characters are no longer ringing true!
I didn't read any of the past stories in this series, and that may have answered my question.
Why in the hell would a man stay with a woman that wouldn't let him have unprotected sex with her, especially if she wanted to get pregnant, unless she is a fucking slut and didn't want to have her husband's baby.
He should just kick his wife's ass to the curb and get on with his life, after he taught that prick Todd how to be a better person, using a baseball bat on his balls.
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Anonymous07/17/13
I don't understand
Why will Melina allow Todd to have unprotected sex with her while denying her husband it when she didn't want to have kids yet from the start of the series. No reason to deny the husband anymore if Todd is allowed to have it.
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Anonymous10/04/14
Cum verses come
Is it just me or does come and cum really mean the same thing in this context?
Noun: Cum - the thick white fluid containing spermatozoa that is ejaculated by the male genital tract. Often used in pornography
Synonyms: ejaculate, seed, semen, seminal fluid
Types: milt, seminal fluid produced by male fish
Type of: bodily fluid, body fluid, humor, humor, liquid body substance the liquid parts of the body
For right or wrong, it's used interchangeably. "Cum" officially and correctly refers to semen, while "come" is the verb for a climax. However, "come" can be used as a noun, and sometimes "cum" is used erroneously as the verb.
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Anonymous08/22/15
Ugh
You turned your characters into ridiculous caricatures in this chapter. Awful. Simply awful stuff.
The hell-spawn nasty wife.
The wimpy cuck with a small dick and low sperm count.
The obnoxious young stud.
And the older slut with a heart of gold.
Yet again I am reading about the 'SLUT' that Melina is portrayed, being impregnated by Todd and allowing her husband to eventually take her 'bareback' this to me shows a total lack of empathy or respect for her husbands feelings. Just to prove an experimental hypothesis, and “Melina wasn't that happy about it “ When she realises that her husband's swimmers were capable of making her pregnant and not Todd she is not happy at being duped by Laura.
Where is the loyalty to her husband after saying "Oh I love you, baby! I'm sorry I was such a bitch to you! I love you!" . This loving wife beggars belief !
English
Sperm Wars
Hi, I read Robin Baker's "Sperm Wars" many years ago and always thought many of his short anecdotes could be the bases for hot Literotica stories. I'm glad I stumbled on this one and I hope you intend to follow the characters' adventures! I guess
I'll have to go back and read the earlier stories, but this one stands up well on its own.
Jumbled up
The Todd and Melina series was a good read, good plot and hot. The Interludes were a jumble of having 20 people just fuck anyone in sight. It just doesn't fit. The behaviour of the wife in Zygote is beyond redemption I would be giving her walking papers. I guess I'm saying the characters are no longer ringing true!
I didn't read any of the past stories in this series, and that may have answered my question.
Why in the hell would a man stay with a woman that wouldn't let him have unprotected sex with her, especially if she wanted to get pregnant, unless she is a fucking slut and didn't want to have her husband's baby.
He should just kick his wife's ass to the curb and get on with his life, after he taught that prick Todd how to be a better person, using a baseball bat on his balls.
I don't understand
Why will Melina allow Todd to have unprotected sex with her while denying her husband it when she didn't want to have kids yet from the start of the series. No reason to deny the husband anymore if Todd is allowed to have it.
Cum verses come
Is it just me or does come and cum really mean the same thing in this context?
Noun: Cum - the thick white fluid containing spermatozoa that is ejaculated by the male genital tract. Often used in pornography
Synonyms: ejaculate, seed, semen, seminal fluid
Types: milt, seminal fluid produced by male fish
Type of: bodily fluid, body fluid, humor, humor, liquid body substance the liquid parts of the body
Sincerely, RWS
Cum v. Come, my $0.02
For right or wrong, it's used interchangeably. "Cum" officially and correctly refers to semen, while "come" is the verb for a climax. However, "come" can be used as a noun, and sometimes "cum" is used erroneously as the verb.
Ugh
You turned your characters into ridiculous caricatures in this chapter. Awful. Simply awful stuff.
The hell-spawn nasty wife.
The wimpy cuck with a small dick and low sperm count.
The obnoxious young stud.
And the older slut with a heart of gold.
You should be embarrassed.
Annony's wife had sperm wars and she did it while married to the asshole
annony. Then she took his sorry ass to the cleaners. I gave this a 5
Hating Melina as acharacter
Yet again I am reading about the 'SLUT' that Melina is portrayed, being impregnated by Todd and allowing her husband to eventually take her 'bareback' this to me shows a total lack of empathy or respect for her husbands feelings. Just to prove an experimental hypothesis, and “Melina wasn't that happy about it “ When she realises that her husband's swimmers were capable of making her pregnant and not Todd she is not happy at being duped by Laura.
Where is the loyalty to her husband after saying "Oh I love you, baby! I'm sorry I was such a bitch to you! I love you!" . This loving wife beggars belief !
Mean Wife
Can't wait to see whose baby it is
Interesting story
But Meline is tough to digest.
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