Bella's Beast Ch. 02

way to go

This is shaping up to be quite interesting. I cant wait for chapter. 3

I am intrigued where this is going, can wait for chapter three. I love the slow build up you are giving and the way in which Bella speaks, too often the females are made to be weak and unable to voice an opinion. Just wish that the chapters were longer! Thanks.

I love this story line but...

I love this story line but longer post make reader more invested in the story. What you have been posting is more a page, I like to see a chapter.

Good story,,

Good story,,but,,the page needs to be a bit longer,,maybe 2 or 3,,to make it a chapter,,something to get interested in for more than 5 minutes,keep up the good writing,,looking for the next chapter soon,i hope..

Please continue

There is mystery and perhaps romance. This story needs to be told.

WAAAAY to Short

Barely time to absorb anything before it cuts o

Ckelly Mamasita

What ever you're calling yourself these days PLEASE UPDATE

NO more???

I guess this is it,,,seems to be another unfinished work,what a waste of readers time,and writer,,why do people do this,,,its more common to find an unfinished story than a finished one,,,,needs to be called the site of make your own endings,,

2 PAGE WONDER!!!

Makes one wonder where the rest of it is,,,,no posts since mid 2013,,,just another unfinished story,,,why do people waste their time and others,,,,have it completed before you start and then just post installments,,,dang it,,this is getting to be such a pain to find any finished stories,,,,,,

more

More please, way tooo long of a wait

Where's the rest of it!?!?

Where's the rest of the story?!?!

Bella'so Beast

I hope you continue writing this story. You have my interest now I want to know what happens next. If you decide to continue please write longer chapters. One page is just way too short. Please finish this this story to the end with many chapters. Thank you.