All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 31'

The Cooperative will obviously be a success. The only doubts left is how to handle Gwen and who is Abby's father.

Well written and nicely paced.

Good character development and an

interesting story line. Thank you.

You might consider taking a moment to add a comment explaining the difference between London and the City. And why you always capitalize City. Some your readers will understand Wall Street, but not know the significance the City.