I Cucked Him in the Club

Loved it

I look forward to reading more of your writing

erotic erotic ?

how did you come up with that name if don't even know the meaning of the word ?

Another whore ...

With a WACC. You think this is an erotic story...???? Get real... To bad I can't give it a minus 5....

Good Story!

YES!! I too fucked a girl in college while her boyfriend watched...LOL! It was great! She put on such a show in front of bf...one of the best pieces of ass I ever had! I loved doing it in front of him....the look on his face made it TWICE as powerful!

It was a nice one, I really liked it. Keep on writing!

good start

Good start expand this story you are doing well lets see where it leads you

Leila does it again

She thinks she's in control but maybe Aaron knows what he's doing. Write some more - let her get gang fucked in front of him - that might be his thing. Wipe the smile of her slutty face and lets see what her limits are when 3 studs are pounding their cocks into her while Aaron watches smiling.

Why?

You say you love him. I think he just realized you don't love him at all. All you wanted was a different cock in that cunt of yours. Thats not a good thing at all. In fact, if he was going to marry you at some point, this might just have jeopardized this . I hope you are really happy, remember a cock doesn't make a man. Its what they do for their family that matters.

The good thing about girlfriends?

They're SO easy to dump. The slut is history. Terrible story.

Inconsistency

You write early about Aaron having to stay sober to drive home, the girl slags him off for wanting to do so despite drink driving being dangerous and stupid, fair enough it's your character. However at the end she needs to catch a cab home? I think you may have lost your place in the story there.

Weird