Did as I suggested then!
Definitely along the lines of my fantasy day. Casually tanning nude and conversing with a young lady, also nude? Golden!
As I frequent frequenter of the beach I love beach stories - I love to bathe topless and I like seeing other people / other people seeing me. I would love to read more of Manoshands - a real life experience would be hot. Has Manoshands ever been on a beach with his Mrs? Did she go topless? How did he feel when she was oggled by other men? How did she look? How was sex later? I'd love to hear that story.
I really like your turns of phrase and the cheekily erotic set up. Now make it pay off! :)
Was going well, why stop?
Well done so far, a nice titillating start. Now I hope you can develop it as well.
PS I publish as London_james2010 on lit
Told you it would be received well LOL x
She was me to a tee! Thank you so much
Is there going to be a follow up?
Being a journalist, I find a read much less enjoyable when one word or phrase is used throughout the entire piece. Great description and please do a follow up, I'd love to read more!
Well done for an excellent first submission, we look forward to more.
She reminds me of me. I loved it.
we get it, she wears it well. let it go.
I took your advice and decided to start reading here. It was very good. Nice easy read and just enough to set the mind and juices going. I will continue to read some more of your stories. Job nicely done!! :)
really great, xoxoxoxo Annette
You know how to write! Thanks for commenting on my story - now I can read yours.
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