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by Anonymous07/21/13

TRULY GREAT! 5 stars for sure

I was so excited to see this chapter posted and you did not disappoint. I cannot wait for the next installment.

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by teedeedub07/25/13

Le Ms

Thanks. Too bad more folks won't take the time to read your stories. Great chapter once again. I hope that there is more to come........

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by Anonymous11/30/13

a question

i hav a question dat y didnt u use anna wen she could hav killed roark wid d flick of her wrist nd y show dis mercy 2 roark wen he went on massacaring every human soul on his way... plz do answer... thanks... great story btw :)

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