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Bush Pilot

byLisa Summers©
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by Anonymous

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Quite, quite beautiful

As well as being erotic, you gave a wonderful set-up and characters that the reader could identify with on some levels, not to mention non-trite dialogue

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by Anonymous12/15/06

sMOOTH sTORY

Well written. No real gaps in the story logic and pleasent to read. An outcome that is plausible.

Floats though... not pontoons.

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by Anonymous02/04/07

Not bad at all

Hi Lisa, I loved the plot of the story and the sex was also great but it's a shame the story wasn't a little longer, we didn't get to know much about the characters' feelings and innermost thoughts. Good effort though, well done.

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by Anonymous03/01/08

Ummm.....

5'9" and 95 pounds...the chick had to be nothing but skin and bones....

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by PAhorny09/24/08

Not bad

I felt the bit of the one gentleman's death made it a little over dramatic, though.

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by Anonymous03/01/09

hot

very hot, i agree too dramatic though

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by Lisa Summers10/03/09

"Behind the Story"

This was one of the first stories I ever wrote, and it certainly shows. Not very refined in plot or much else, it DID give me a good chance to work on depictions of lesbian sex....and let's face it, that's pretty important around here!

Anyway, here is the secret concerning WHY I wrote this particular story, with this setting: I wanted to make a very bad pun with the word "bush", and so it was pretty much going to be about *something happening* in either Alaska, or Africa, and featuring one or more girls with hairy, um, mounds. I know marginally more about AK than I do Congo, and a fair amount about hairy twats, and so 'Bush Pilot' resulted. That's it!

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fab

just found your stories, Lisa. Love them x

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by Anonymous08/14/14

Just right...

...a little jewel of a read.

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by Anonymous08/24/14

Amazing, totally believable love story

That was so very well written, I could almost sense the aroma in the air.

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