by Lisa Summers
As well as being erotic, you gave a wonderful set-up and characters that the reader could identify with on some levels, not to mention non-trite dialogue
Well written. No real gaps in the story logic and pleasent to read. An outcome that is plausible.
Floats though... not pontoons.
Hi Lisa, I loved the plot of the story and the sex was also great but it's a shame the story wasn't a little longer, we didn't get to know much about the characters' feelings and innermost thoughts. Good effort though, well done.
5'9" and 95 pounds...the chick had to be nothing but skin and bones....
I felt the bit of the one gentleman's death made it a little over dramatic, though.
This was one of the first stories I ever wrote, and it certainly shows. Not very refined in plot or much else, it DID give me a good chance to work on depictions of lesbian sex....and let's face it, that's pretty important around here!
Anyway, here is the secret concerning WHY I wrote this particular story, with this setting: I wanted to make a very bad pun with the word "bush", and so it was pretty much going to be about *something happening* in either Alaska, or Africa, and featuring one or more girls with hairy, um, mounds. I know marginally more about AK than I do Congo, and a fair amount about hairy twats, and so 'Bush Pilot' resulted. That's it!
That was so very well written, I could almost sense the aroma in the air.
This story I just read is beautiful how to lovers found each other I cannot wait for the next story as a follow on to this story it is brilliant thank you Lisa Summers you are a fantastic writer thank you.xx