A Weird One Ch. 18

Thank God

FINALLY GODDAMN IT!!!
Good stories series, highly addictive and as much as I
enjoyed reading it, this was a welcome addition as it
is the last.

Madge is still a whore more than a mom, cause in spite
of knocking up Marge, Bobby's dad still had more of a
right to call the kettle black, but whatever, he can
always get himself something better.

Good for Mary, getting what she likes, cause even though
she's a serious tramp, she was always a straight shooter
and I dug that.

Happy for Phil & Gail, hopefully she'll be less of a
game playing hussy and more of a wife to the guy who
sought to please her...but still I've gotta ask, WHAT KIND
OF A MAN DOESN'T LIKE EATING PUSSY!?!?!

Pam is just as much a slattern as her fucking floozy
daughter Natasha...she was fucking around and yet it all
worked out for her in the end. He deserves a big tittied
blonde over a bitch like that.

Good for Shelly...good for her... I guess...Andrea sure as
hell didn't deserve to keep a good man, fuck her. as far
as Gloria, never really gave much of damn for that one.

Tina's epilogue made me laugh my ass off!

I can only imagine the type of shit that will one day
go one between an 18 year old Bobby Junior and Carol...
Hell loads of the younger ladies who were obsessed with
his dad will be after his junk; but mommy's cousin "Aunty
Carol" yeah... Nancy too...

Horray for Vonda, like any really gave a shit about that
annoying bitch...her dad though worries me, what kind of
a black man is so hardup for a white son in law, jesus
christ.

Natasha got what she deserved...I can see her shacking up
with Eddie Wooters and popping out a couple of bastards
that might end up with serious psychological problems.

Finally Bobby always the douche bag but not too bad of one,
I like Becky and how she turned out...good ending for them.

Sad to see it end

I guess you had to end it sooner or later. Personally, I would have preferred later.
A fun series. I enjoyed every bit of it.

JOB WELL DONE JPB

I'm Sorry to see this series end, however you pulled it all together at the end and made things believable, so I applaud you for a job well done. I'm looking forward to your next series and hope that it can be half as enjoyable as this one was!!
Bobby should send Wesley an enormous gift for helping to expose Natasha, for the slut she is (who wants to be married to a slut dumb enough to bring home an STD), and also for the fact that his fling with Natasha, freed up Becky who is great for Bobby.
I might be the only one who read this series who actually likes Madge, I realize she was an admitted slut, but she eventually ended those activities, and remained true to Bobby, Marge, and her Hubby. There wasn't a mention of what she was doing now, other than an assumption that she may still be carrying on with Marge, but I think Becky would be up to a threesome with Madge if the opportunity arose, but not my story and no way I could have done the job JPB did, so I will shut up and just say again~~THANKS FOR THE READ!!

Fantastic series

Thanks JPB for one awesome series and I have to admit that I'm sad to see it end.

My only complaints were Becky got added to the story way to late for such an important character and that Bobby's bitch of a mother got off way to lightly as it takes some fucking nerve to divorce Bobby's dad when she is fucking the bit on the side as well.

Loved it!

My favorite series ever! Sorry to see it end.

SAY IT AIN'T SO!

I know it had to end sooner or later, but I honestly think I would have preferred a more gradual ending, JPB. This final chapter gave no hint that the series was ending until the Epilog and that makes the ending of the very good series a decision not well thought-out, but one born out of the author's uncertainty of how to end the story of Marchant. Regardless, I've thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter, Bob, and will continue to look for your stories every time I log on to Literotica.

Abrupt

This was a pretty abrupt ending to a fairly long series. Would like to see you write another story, but this time develop the sex a bit more, since in most of this story the sex was an afterthought and not very descriptive.

GREAT series! I always love to read your work!

I have to agree...

I have to agree this was a GREAT series!! I love the way you slowly built each chapter leaving the reader wanting more and wondering what will happen next. I do have to agree that you should have brought Becky in sooner but it was good. As for Natasha well I figured she would turn out like she did. I even thought she would end up working a corner somewhere. You tied the series up in a nice way and I look forward to reading your next story hope it will be as great as this one was. If I could I would give it more then 5 stars.

Sorry to see the story end

But I can only imagine that the story was beginning to be a real chore for Bob instead of being fun to write.

All I can say is; thank you very much for the good story.

Sorry to see it end.

Thanks for the story. I enjoyed all of it.

dynamite work

its been a long and great piece of work you have done I am sad to see it go I must admit it was a bit abrupt the ending I wish it was more drawn out but hey all things end sometime

Ubelievable

I mean, most of it was pretty could, if improbable.
But the thing that threw it off for me was; Andrea. Seriously? Her husband would rather divorce her than nail her ass? The ass is the hole-y grail for every guy I know.
Seriously, terrific series. It did turn into one massive fuck/suck/eat fest but it was entertaining throughout.
I was glad to see that the fated couple from the beginning didn't reconcile. And that Bobby proved his poiint by marrying the slut, who managed to stay true ever after.

Noooooooo!

I know it had to come, but a little warning would have been nice. What series am I supposed to read now? While I wish it was Gloria (it sucks that he lost contact with her by the way), I am pleased that he ended up with Becky. I still hate his mom.

I hope you continue writing. Personally I would love it if you just continued this series (pre epilogue) cause I am interested in how Becky won him over plus slutasha had to at least done something to have tried to win him back.

why? why? why?

yr stories is one of the best but why did u have to end it so abruptly. what am i to do now? the male lead's character was the best of all the stories i have read and matches to mine. i m gonna miss it

loved it ,sorry it had to end, please keep on with your stories

an excellent story

waiting for the new one

First off, definitely a 5 star given how much I felt so involved with all the characters from beginning to end. I was unlucky, or lucky in a way, to only have picked up reading this when JPB released Chap 15 so I was able to devour through all the parts within a short time.
I can only imagine how interminable the wait must have seemed between releases for those who picked it up right from the beginning.

To be honest, I still held out hopes for issues to be somehow resolved between Bobby and Natasha although that could be just down to my personal preference for romance and "good" endings. It would have allowed things to come to a full circle since I went back and took a peek at the very beginning of Ch 1 and I was reminded of how head-over-heels smitten Bobby was with Natasha at first sight.
Bobby was her very first and they held out so long without intercourse, which made it all the more special.

Bobby obviously had his fair share of secrets, with his evergrowing harem and countless sexual encounters and thus I was hoping he still had it in him to somehow patch things up with her. Obviously she too had to enact great changes on herself as well in order to make it work.

Like a few comments mentioned, the ending did seem a little rushed and I would have liked it to gradually lead up to a conclusive epilogue.

Nevertheless, I thank you JPB from the bottom of my heart for this marvellous work of literature. It kept me up several nights with me voraciously devouring through the many chapters not in search of sexual gratification but simply because I was genuinely eager to find out what happens next.

The feeling of knowing that there's yet another chapter to be read and then the dread when I finally caught up to the latest release is in my opinion, a testament to how much I truly enjoyed reading your stories.

Here's to plenty of great stories from you and wonderful times!

PS: Apologies for this long and ranting comment but I felt your readers deserved publicly seeing how much some of us appreciate your work.

Great series

I enjoyed reading every chapter. Not sure what happened with this one, but it had spelling error all over it. While a minor thing, it is very distracting to me and takes away from the overall story, especially when I have seen the others and not noticed errors.

Thanks for a great read

Great tale of great tail!

It has been my favorite sexy soap opera and have read each chapter breathelessly as they came out. I understand why stories must end, but i really could have continued enjoying the adventures of Bobby for a long long time. Thank you for sharing.

Good story

Mostly well written, very good story line. Occassional lapses with spelling and keeping names straight that were slightly annoying. I feel you took the story as far as it should have gone and ended it quite tidily. Well done.

Sudden end!! Please more

For 18 chapters Bobby was 18-19 and suddenly he is married for 15 years in the last few paragraphs?? If you can, please do more of this story. It was absolutely fantastic

Whoever referred to this as a soap opera had it correct

In a good way

I now pronounce you satyr and slut.

And they lived happily ever after... As if!

CLASSIC NOVEL WITH DELIGHTFULLY NASTY TWISTS

CONGRATULATIONS- You capture the wild, weird side of a fanciful young rake. BOB' is totally believable as a character, even if the situations he gets into are pure fantasy. We aren't looking for the Grapes of Wrath when we come to Literotica. The only criticism I have is the ocassional misuse of the verbs "to lie" and "to lay" plus an even less frequent mix up of girls' names. 5 stars is not enough distinction for your fine work. Thank you for sharing it with us,

That was a very good story even if the end is a little rushed. The only thing that bother me is with Natasha and Gail. in the beginning you made it look if Bob has something of special with each but you crushed it for no reason( in my opinion) and we know and he know what he did with the other women! Otherwise the rest is alright no complaint ( only for Natasha and Gail because he asked each them to marry him).

Lovely story shame it couldn't of been bob and Tasha who got married then may be she would have been faithful with boby if they had wed as them two where ment to be but either way damd good story

What the hell?!?! You end this series just like that, but you decide to fuck the reader over by failing to reach a conclusion on all your other storieS.....screw you!

Amazing

I have been on this site for a long time and have to say this is the best story I have ever read yes alittle rushed but still awesome well done

Highly improbable indeed . . .

but fun to reed, for the most part - and I mean the whole 18 chapters. Some parts I would call hilariously funny. The improbable side in my opinion is to a large degree connected to the sex action between Bobby/Rob and his numerous female partners. I find it downright monotonous! In my experience women's preferences are much, much more varied, although I agree that being able to give really, really good oral will endear you to a lot of women. The secret here is that you have to love doing it. On Adult Friend Finder I used to call it my favourite pastime and had a pic of me in action. The same goes for women giving good head: They have to at least like, if possible love doing it. I am less than a year from being 90 and have been sexually active for over 70 years. I have loved doing oral ever since I had my first sex with a woman. I have found a few women who can only get off from vaginal penetration. Most women however, love oral, and get off on it if it's properly done. Early on in my time many were surprised, but oral sex has become much more common. One of the things I find hard to believe in this series is that so many of the male characters seem to have serious problems with it. For my part, oral and manual stimulation is what has kept my sex life going for the last 15 years, after a transuretral prostate resection left me with a serious case of ED, and neither Viagra nor Cialis was any help.

Monotonous in the extreme...

Shit like this makes me want to give up porn. Over and over and over again, same shit ad nauseum.

Because the series was written a little less than four years ago, I had the advantage of reading it as a whole all at once rather than wait for each chapter. I loved it as a whole but I wish the Bobby/Mom/Mary and Bobby/Mom/Madge threesome's were described a little more rather than the same "we did the usual combinations" paragraph. I found those threesome's very hot.
Like others have commented, I thought the ending was rushed. Instead of getting divorced over Madge's pregnancy, I thought it that it would have been better if Bobby's parents and Madge reach an agreement and live together. Everybody wins.
Looking forward to reading all of JPB's other stories! This series gets five stars and a favorite point from me!! Thanks!