It is very well written and it is very hot, but I really did not like the idea of a father masturbating to the sight of her daughter being raped. It was disturbing but I must admit I cpuldn´t stop reading. But it was still discusting.
That's completely fair, Anonymous. It's an experiment in combining categories, and instead of fans of both kinds of stories liking it, I think it came out to be less than what either kind of reader wants. Not really a success. Thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.
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It´s Good But,...
It is very well written and it is very hot, but I really did not like the idea of a father masturbating to the sight of her daughter being raped. It was disturbing but I must admit I cpuldn´t stop reading. But it was still discusting.
Re "It's Good But"
That's completely fair, Anonymous. It's an experiment in combining categories, and instead of fans of both kinds of stories liking it, I think it came out to be less than what either kind of reader wants. Not really a success. Thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.
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