Obviously written for the pleasure of the author, not the reader, and really no good
by
Anonymous07/13/05
boring
you need more practice at erotic fiction try to rewrite the story make it more graphic and give the mom a job as a
stripper or whore something to make her interesting.
by
Anonymous12/05/05
Not erotic
Nasty and misogynistic; nobody but (possibly) the writer could have gotten any pleasure from this.
by
Anonymous11/08/06
slick story!!
Maybe I'm as weird as the author but it was hot,hot,hot! How about more like that?
by
Anonymous12/30/06
not at all erotic
this story is total shit....if i would be at sallys place then i would have killed the son
by
Anonymous05/10/07
story doesnt make sense
this story doesnt make any sense if the mother likes it then why did she cry all the time lol
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Anonymous10/09/07
Sitting on the fence
You need to make up your mind what you wanna wright about. If u gonna rape the mom go full out fuck her hard in every hole.
by
Anonymous10/09/07
Wow, does this woman need to kick some ass
Sally clearly needs a little bit of the Sicilian in her. Sally girl - here's what you do. Wait til your sorry ass son and husband are asleep. Take a heavy pan from your kitchen and pop them both a few times in the head and groin area (son mostly for the groin stuff, but if the mood strikes you, hit the lowlife thieving hubby there too). If the pan slips and a few fingers get broken, oops. While they are both knocked out cold, duct tape their dicks to the bed post. That ought to be plenty painful to remove when they come to.
Next, put all their clothing in the incinerator or fireplace and burn them. Leave them nothing. Dump any remaining food stuffs down the disposal. If either of them have a vehicle, put some sugar in the gas tank. Accidentally smash the TV. Yank the phone cord clean out the wall. Cell phones? Oops, they landed underfoot and got smashed - too bad. Finally, empty their wallets, take any jewelry you have, pack a bag and grab the next bus that is leaving town. Go visit family. Or just go on an adventure and establish yourself somewhere else.
Most of all, stop crying and get mad, then do something about it.
by
Anonymous03/08/08
Not That Good
First Of All The Plot Of The Story Was Ver UnSure. It was boring. Plus U Didnt Develope The Main Theme. I Didnt Really Like That sally Was Basically Their "Bitch".
AWFUL STORY, EVERY WORD OF THE STORY WAS AWFUL, a woman just wouldn't let their own family do that to them nowadays their is plenty of ways to fight back ie leave home and not come back - fight back - kitchen knives come in handy, jesus christ some stories are so male driven they suck out loud
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Anonymous08/27/09
fuck you people
Fuck you people quite frankly your right this could never happen but thats why its an erotic fantasy. Sure i don't think it falls under the incest catagory but its still good none the less. i support this author.
I'd just like to take this opportunity to say that this story was actually written as a spoof with some one I used to write with as the main character, sally34.
I'd like to also point out that it is a work of fiction and not meant to be taken seriously.
Petertowers
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Anonymous09/22/11
with more details, it could have been great
this was a really good story. with more details and more chapters, this could be a GREAT story.
by
Anonymous10/15/12
Made me cry ! I know the reason you posted this story so that we perverts would think sensibly! Thanks man
Wow......a woman may think of having sex with her son, I have typical fantasies. But having such a dominate, unfeeling son take advantage in such a forceful way is beyond my fantasies. I partially identified with Sally in that she had no way to resist her son. She became a true submissive. The story still did have its moments of excitement for me however.
by
Anonymous02/29/16
Pleasure of the author?
Yes, Rassendyll, the author has already he writes for the pleasure of it.
He just post his stories here so we can enjoy them. If you don't then don't read them, just move along. that's what we adults do.
RH
PS I'm only Anonymous because I cant remember my pin.....
English
Very arousing but lacking.........
The concept of incestous nonconsent sex in this story couls have been more well represented if it have been more sexually graphic.
Boring
Obviously written for the pleasure of the author, not the reader, and really no good
boring
you need more practice at erotic fiction try to rewrite the story make it more graphic and give the mom a job as a
stripper or whore something to make her interesting.
Not erotic
Nasty and misogynistic; nobody but (possibly) the writer could have gotten any pleasure from this.
slick story!!
Maybe I'm as weird as the author but it was hot,hot,hot! How about more like that?
not at all erotic
this story is total shit....if i would be at sallys place then i would have killed the son
story doesnt make sense
this story doesnt make any sense if the mother likes it then why did she cry all the time lol
Sitting on the fence
You need to make up your mind what you wanna wright about. If u gonna rape the mom go full out fuck her hard in every hole.
Wow, does this woman need to kick some ass
Sally clearly needs a little bit of the Sicilian in her. Sally girl - here's what you do. Wait til your sorry ass son and husband are asleep. Take a heavy pan from your kitchen and pop them both a few times in the head and groin area (son mostly for the groin stuff, but if the mood strikes you, hit the lowlife thieving hubby there too). If the pan slips and a few fingers get broken, oops. While they are both knocked out cold, duct tape their dicks to the bed post. That ought to be plenty painful to remove when they come to.
Next, put all their clothing in the incinerator or fireplace and burn them. Leave them nothing. Dump any remaining food stuffs down the disposal. If either of them have a vehicle, put some sugar in the gas tank. Accidentally smash the TV. Yank the phone cord clean out the wall. Cell phones? Oops, they landed underfoot and got smashed - too bad. Finally, empty their wallets, take any jewelry you have, pack a bag and grab the next bus that is leaving town. Go visit family. Or just go on an adventure and establish yourself somewhere else.
Most of all, stop crying and get mad, then do something about it.
Not That Good
First Of All The Plot Of The Story Was Ver UnSure. It was boring. Plus U Didnt Develope The Main Theme. I Didnt Really Like That sally Was Basically Their "Bitch".
STUPID STORY
AWFUL STORY, EVERY WORD OF THE STORY WAS AWFUL, a woman just wouldn't let their own family do that to them nowadays their is plenty of ways to fight back ie leave home and not come back - fight back - kitchen knives come in handy, jesus christ some stories are so male driven they suck out loud
fuck you people
Fuck you people quite frankly your right this could never happen but thats why its an erotic fantasy. Sure i don't think it falls under the incest catagory but its still good none the less. i support this author.
Authors Note
I'd just like to take this opportunity to say that this story was actually written as a spoof with some one I used to write with as the main character, sally34.
I'd like to also point out that it is a work of fiction and not meant to be taken seriously.
Petertowers
with more details, it could have been great
this was a really good story. with more details and more chapters, this could be a GREAT story.
Made me cry ! I know the reason you posted this story so that we perverts would think sensibly! Thanks man
true submissive
Wow......a woman may think of having sex with her son, I have typical fantasies. But having such a dominate, unfeeling son take advantage in such a forceful way is beyond my fantasies. I partially identified with Sally in that she had no way to resist her son. She became a true submissive. The story still did have its moments of excitement for me however.
Pleasure of the author?
Yes, Rassendyll, the author has already he writes for the pleasure of it.
He just post his stories here so we can enjoy them. If you don't then don't read them, just move along. that's what we adults do.
RH
PS I'm only Anonymous because I cant remember my pin.....
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