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The Hungers of the Placenta

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by Anonymous

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by todski2807/15/13

Explains why

I always refer to my kids as parasites :-)

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by Angeline07/15/13

I have always wondered

if you write (or study) Eastern poetic forms because your poems are so spare and precise. This one does so much with so few words. I love poems that make every word count. And then of course, every word in this poem is true.

Great read with wonderful use of metaphor and simile. Thank you.

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by twelveoone07/15/13

my opin

the failed parachute makes it
5ed

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