I'm a writer also. Can I borrow some of these characters for a story I have under development? I won't need them too long and promise to lend you some of mine in the future.
This was really quite superb - thank you for giving me the biggest smile of the week! I am not a writer, but if it's this much fun I shall just have to try it out.
Very good indeed - a mini-masterpiece, well worth every one of its five stars!
Dude, I love your imagination!! The premise of the story is awesome - characters having lives outside their writers - and it's funny too. (you should write a chapter two with the 'honeymoon') Five stars! (if they had more, I'd give more....)
What a premise, characters that have a life beyond the written word. Must keep this in mind when I sit in front iof the keyboard. or when I wake up in the middle of the night and the plots just come rolling in. Full Marks for a new twist.
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