Of the hundreds of Incest/Taboo stories to be found on Literotica, there are all too few devoted to the subject of male to male family fun.
This is one of the few--and a very good one !!!
I hope this talented new writer will follow up on this fine start with other stories on this or other themes.
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Anonymous07/18/13
Good idea, executed poorly
You need to read a lot more before you begin to write. You had a great idea and failed to execute it so that I still don't have a hard on. I am not gay, but I love stories about men sucking cocks, so you failed.
Welcome addition
Of the hundreds of Incest/Taboo stories to be found on Literotica, there are all too few devoted to the subject of male to male family fun.
This is one of the few--and a very good one !!!
I hope this talented new writer will follow up on this fine start with other stories on this or other themes.
Good idea, executed poorly
You need to read a lot more before you begin to write. You had a great idea and failed to execute it so that I still don't have a hard on. I am not gay, but I love stories about men sucking cocks, so you failed.
Pa -rump a pump pump
I don't particularly mind gay stories, but I hate group sex. The visual of a bunch of lumberjacky guys getting it on isn't pleasant.
I agree great idea but you didn't quite hit the mark for me. Maybe you can rewrite it.
Wow
I don´t get how this isn´t good. Visualizing that scene is incredible! I would´ve loved to join you.
CUM Daddy
Nice holiday, Ho HO HO!
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