The Pet Trainer

.lol

cold nose great

Excellent

Nice set up and follow through. Good Job!

Not As Good AsMiz Sara

but then vows broken are vows broken.

First story of yours

That I have greatly disliked. He should have been retaining Miz. Sara's services instead of meeting with the trainer. Plus with estrus being "brought on" so often during training is there a chance for little Marco on the way?

Disconcertingly Droll !

I often see youngish Jimmy Stewert as the narrator of F.M.'s stories. The slightly pervy J.S. in Hitchcock's ' Rear Window ' would have worked post closing twist. Decent read as long as one doesn't overthink it.

Bitches

Don't raise their leg to pee, they squat.

A different flavor from you -

But a good story - it was pretty clear this would not go as well as he th9ught when Sam responded with such enthusiasm and he asked for what Sam got - just enough ambiguity to give away a potential for trouble heh -

The unspoken anxiety it presents is, can anyone who knows about Marcus's training now get any one of the trained women got sex stupid with the techniques he uses (massive cheat potential)?

I was going to give you....

4 stars ....that is until I read....... YOUR NOSE IS COLD.

I howled....LOL

and gave you 5 stars

Stupid

Very stupid.

Regardless of the outcome someone should have had at least a bloody nose out of this. Training always needs to be reinforced. I guess Russel is just going to get used to Heather's trainer being with her every few months. Perhaps Russel would even like the two's love child to raise as well. After all Heather was "In heat" at the time.

Yep... pretty stupid.

Fun read

You have written a light and fun story. It is relatively error free and easy to read.

The entertainment value combined with the tongue in cheek "Cesar Milan" character tickled me and so I give this 5*.

Ditto

Light, funny, sexy, tongue in cheek. 5*

Great story!!

Thanks for sharing.

so funny

Everyone needs a pet properly trained.

humurou howl

FM yah did't again! With three pages of carefully constructed wit and sly satire.

I'm sure annoyingmousies squat to pee but my wife had a Peke bitch that peed lifting her leg just like a male.

When talking to other dog owners about that, they said they also have seen female dogs lifting their legs to pee and males that squat. Sorry for your ignorance.

And it is hilarious that the adolescent trolls posting comments to the LW stories never seem to grasp the differences between Fiction and Reality.

I only read this because you wrote it

I didn't notice what category it was in, I was just happy to find a story of yours that I hadn't read yet. I'm sorry I found it. Mind control is rape; and in no way, subject matter for entertainment. While I could suspend belief to consider unwilling hypnosis; Russell's actions are completely unbelievable. I would have ignored the phone, and Marco would be in a hospital. The idea that something this radical wouldn't be completely spelled out in advance with signitures required to avoid death from a misunderstanding is as big a stretch as the original primise.

Sorry, premise.

Good humour

Loved this story. 5*

Tony NZ

Should be a "0."

This is really a piece of crap!!!!

Better check your facts about Dog behaviour

Just as men and women behave differently when they pee, so do dogs. Only male dogs lift their legs to do it. Just think about the anatomy: If a she-dog tried to do so, the result would be non-productive! Instead, they just squat down. Just as women tend to do when there is no commode available.
OK, during the times when long pettycoats were standard female dress, lots of women relieved themselves while standing up still, and when they walked on they would leave a little puddle behind.

@ walrus90

You're incorrect. I've seen many female dogs hike a leg when peeing. Granted, they don't "aim" at trees, posts, etc., but some definitely hike a leg. :)

good story

The cold nose were perfect.
Cheating/Wife watching only pisses me off. It's not my cup of tea.
It was very unprofessional of Marco to forget a rubber.
As it's a Mind control story I'd like to know a notch more about of the technique even if hypnosis were hinted. Russell should have received a few more instructions on his new bitches and it would have been prudent to discuss the misunderstanding with Marco and later Heather. Also did Lady expect anything on wednesday evening or were she only reacting on Heather.
The story was good. It could have been even better if Heather described her heat in details and her trouble with (unwillingly) cheating.
I've read another Mind controle story where a wife with a big uncastrated dog went for intensive (1 hour) obedience training. The automated master/dog training were accidently switched. Much humiliation and a few days later the husband returns to a very blushing, naked, housebroken, and subservient pet wife on all fours. And yes, "the bitch" went into heat on the dogs command.

Literotica should help authors categorize stories in multiple categories and showing contents codes like mf, mm, ff, mc, wife, before reading. The tag system could use a small overhaul.

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Death.

I would have fucking killed.

1*

Jesus mo********er! Your stories have two levels. The ones above 4.50 are awesome. The ones below 4.50 are piss awful. This one belongs to the bottom of the heap with the other dog shit that you write.

Gawd I Loved That!!

That was hysterical!! I loved it! Please write more!

awful

You just shattered my opinion of you. Fucking cuck bullshit. I've never once in my life ever thought hey it would be cool to have some guy fuck my wife. Your trash go let a guy fuck your wife and humiliate you you fucking cuck faggot.