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Kali's Waltz

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by Anonymous

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by erectus12307/15/13

too intense to read without a joint and a glass

of cold vodka. some good stuff here

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by Ashesh907/15/13

Manna to a Mindless Info Junkie

like yours truly ----- i mentally zoomed into an orgasmic plateau just readin' ur verses Top to Bottom & Bottom to Top !!!! Don't expect many others to appreciate ur effort , Bro ..........

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by twelveoone07/15/13

problem is

if there are gems they are buried in a blocotext and hyphenated mess, an emulation of white noise or madness? A shame - the Bindersen part cracked me up, as did some of the others

the new Russian-front inspired Fok Wolf fighter jets?? purpose here? inaccurate information

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