"For the first time, Vivian wondered if Mrs. Banks received some kind of amorphous pleasure from the nightly punishment sessions." I was wondering the same thing myself!. This is a great series but the only one getting off is Vivian (and the Earl occasionally). An explanation of Mrs. Banks' motivation would be appreciated, if only as a sub-plot. Excellent series, though. Can't wait til the next instalment! :)
Great chapter, looking forward to when they actually get together and would love it even more if Vivian did one thing to shake Mrs Banks up a bit and her future hubby! I know you imply that he has feelings for Vivian but I kinda want him to fall hard and maybe find both himself and Mrs B having a few shocks too, after all what Vivian has endured, albeit joyously most of the time! Really enjoyed he read as always. Thanks.
Will we get to see the wedding and some of the marriage? Or is that for another story?
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I like another reader, would love Vivian to do something to shake things up. After all, even her upcoming rebellion is being planned out for her, I think it would be amazing to see other people besides herself thrown off their game.
I have enjoyed the story until this chapter, but I will jump ship now, as the story is going in a direction I don't like, to harsh punishment and being set up for failure.
I will be looking forward to your next installment.
As the level of pain increases the pleasure of the upcoming climax seems to build. It will be interesting to see what might happen if the pleasure does not follow the pain as it has up to this point in the story.
I'd hate to get lost in this house!
Wow- what the heck! O revisited.
"For the first time, Vivian wondered if Mrs. Banks received some kind of amorphous pleasure from the nightly punishment sessions." I was wondering the same thing myself!. This is a great series but the only one getting off is Vivian (and the Earl occasionally). An explanation of Mrs. Banks' motivation would be appreciated, if only as a sub-plot. Excellent series, though. Can't wait til the next instalment! :)
Yet another scorching chapter!
It goes with the equally scorching day here in England! Thank you for this addition to an already wonderful story! Five stars again.
Awesome!
Pleeeeze don't make us wait too long! I anxiously await for the next installment!
Great story.
I am really enjoying this story. Keep it up.
awesome read again :-). very excited to see vivian rebel a little. what's on the agenda next can't wait for the next chapter
Great chapter, looking forward to when they actually get together and would love it even more if Vivian did one thing to shake Mrs Banks up a bit and her future hubby! I know you imply that he has feelings for Vivian but I kinda want him to fall hard and maybe find both himself and Mrs B having a few shocks too, after all what Vivian has endured, albeit joyously most of the time! Really enjoyed he read as always. Thanks.
Really enjoying this story
Will we get to see the wedding and some of the marriage? Or is that for another story?
I like another reader, would love Vivian to do something to shake things up. After all, even her upcoming rebellion is being planned out for her, I think it would be amazing to see other people besides herself thrown off their game.
I have enjoyed the story until this chapter, but I will jump ship now, as the story is going in a direction I don't like, to harsh punishment and being set up for failure.
I will be looking forward to your next installment.
Marriage Training Ch 10
As the level of pain increases the pleasure of the upcoming climax seems to build. It will be interesting to see what might happen if the pleasure does not follow the pain as it has up to this point in the story.
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