I gave your story a 3. But just one question, are they going to get together?? If yes you already have a 5 from me :-). Please add the next chapter.
This story screams for another part (or more) - so please more from these two.
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I gave your story a 3. But just one question, are they going to get together?? If yes you already have a 5 from me :-).
Please add the next chapter.
This story screams for another part (or more) - so please more from these two.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Holiday House or
More submissions by Ashson.