I'm concerned about the betrayal and drama you suggest is coming, but I'm diggin this so far. Thank you.
I am an absolute fan of random Japanese phrases intermingled with normal speech n u've done it PERFECT!!!
The sex was drawn out to the point it was boring.
Stage is set pieces are moving. Keep things interesting.
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I'm concerned about the betrayal and drama you suggest is coming, but I'm diggin this so far. Thank you.
I am an absolute fan of random Japanese phrases intermingled with normal speech n u've done it PERFECT!!!
The sex was drawn out to the point it was boring.
The sex was drawn out to the point it was boring.
Good set up
Stage is set pieces are moving. Keep things interesting.
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