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Dynamics of a Human Heart Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Maximguy07/19/13

Good.

I'm concerned about the betrayal and drama you suggest is coming, but I'm diggin this so far. Thank you.

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by Anonymous02/03/15

I am an absolute fan of random Japanese phrases intermingled with normal speech n u've done it PERFECT!!!

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by Anonymous06/17/16

The sex was drawn out to the point it was boring.

The sex was drawn out to the point it was boring.

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by Anonymous07/31/16

Good set up

Stage is set pieces are moving. Keep things interesting.

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