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The Promise

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by Anonymous

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by mdwdirect07/19/13

Wow...thank you for writing this

So true to life. An amazingly honest and sexy story.

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by Anonymous07/19/13

well ..

This is, after all, a fantasy fiction site ..

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by Anonymous07/19/13

:)

I love your writing so much, the way you describe the intensity and the anticipation is just spot on. Please write more! 5 stars :)

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by GimletEdge07/19/13

Brilliant as always

This is a story that's poignant in the emotional exchange, but fiery hot in the sexual encounter. I choose to believe that the reason it ends the way it does suggests that there will be more such moments ahead for the two of them.

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