All Comments on 'Revenge'

Dam man what an imagination, & another good time was had by all. you old fart

But completely unrealistic. It is so implausible that it would be impossible.

Really imaginative? He knew she would get mad, want to fuck someone else, knew where she would go to get drunk, knew just where to send his friendto fuck her. Wow, he really is good? Unique turns and twists are interesting if the details are believable, but this is an absolute fractured fairy tale!

Pure shit.

so bad, it made me choke. And chuckle. Thanks for writing, I think... Mancelt.

You do your birthdays your way I'll do mine different. But then I.m not married to a slut.

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how would he know where she would be? and the matter of letting her anger boil over to that point? silly husband and wife. me thinks their further birthdays together may be numbered

They play a game and this is what they get.

of course it didnt take too much. TK U MLJ LV NV

What revenge? Did I miss a page? Did you leave something out. I can't read? Seems like this sad marriage is heading for a divorce. Both the husband and the wife are sleeping with other people. And they aren't talking about it or much at all it seems. Time for divorce court. Just another sad tale of two people falling out of love. Amazing what a lack of communication does to a marriage. But your ending - "Revenge is Sweet?" Exactly who do you think is getting revenge? Makes no sense.

the do have a tendency to become greedy. TK U MLJ LV NV

a cheater cheating on a cheater with a cheater.

Picking up an STD maybe? You need to look up the definition of revenge and try again.

Why do shits like these low-lives even bother getting married?!

A shit story full of cheating skels!

Keep your day job!

Even flies would faint if they came upon this lump of shit!

that was odd.

Others have covered most of the how's and why's except....

What would have happened if the wife didn't go out or backed off at the last minute and thrown Lou out? Tom goes from being a low life twat willing to piss his wife off the the extreme of cheating on him just to play a birthday prank while he's out getting some strange as well as her, to a sewer level twat that gets the strange while his wife, pissed off and as tempted as she is, resists and respects her vows.....oops

THEN some revenge would be called for and maybe the author would write about it, unlike in this attempt.

Just a bunch of idiots. Why be married?

That had to be as dumb as any story I've ever read.

Let's see - she's willing to cheat because he's not paying attention to her, and then he surprises her with swapping. Please get a couple of opinions before you publish another story again, because this was a complete waste of my time.

Epic slut. Divorce her for sure.