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by SparksWillFly07/20/13

Nice Story

I'm always looking for new writers to add to my favorites. Thanks. Just one tiny comment. During the passionate activity, your description of where each of them put their hands seemed impossible, like a game of twister. I guess a chapter two could work. Hope so.

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