I still like the story......BUT.....there was no saying good bye to her parents or others.
They were in the parents kitchen putting away left overs then 1/2 hour later they're home playing video games. POOR transition to me...made it hard to follow OR maybe I'm just slow.....
Something must have happened to Mercedes' dad for him to have such hatred against white people.
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I still like the story......BUT.....there was no saying good bye to her parents or others.
They were in the parents kitchen putting away left overs then 1/2 hour later they're home playing video games. POOR transition to me...made it hard to follow OR maybe I'm just slow.....
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