Never My Love

43 pages.....

Ummmmm.... Seeing how you're one of my favorite authors, I will read this knowing it won't be a waste of my time. Though the task is daunting, here I go.

You're killing me

MP,

You are the only lit author that I would even consider reading a story of this length. I'm about 4 pages into it and of course it's good. My sanity, however, requires me to ask you to please break up stories of this length into parts. My brain can process that a little easier.

Welcome Back!!

I'm on chapter 8 and have to stop reading for now....As Always, a wonderful read.
Thanks!
Alan

Great Story

Great Story, Started it around 11:00 PM, finished at 2:52 AM. Sunday Morning.

Thank you for coming back

Stayed up to read it all. Great story

Stayed up very late

I could not stop reading the story. Touching, a quiet tear, and some humour. What more can you ask.

OK.......

As I finally finish this story almost a full day later (making me 10 min late for work LOL), I release a sigh of accomplishment. In spite of your consistency in your various stories amongst your characters and story lines, you have yet again drawn me into your nostalgic world of musicality and chivalry. I'd like to thank you for once again providing a temporary escape from the demands of a working woman/mom/student.

Just one major complaint..... the length. It was daunting. It was also the reason it took me so long to finish. I kept having to stop and do other things. It would have been an easier pill to swallow had it been broken into 2-3 pieces.

Rock on and keep writing! I look forward to your next submission.

WONDERFUL

This is a very long story, but it never goes dull, keeps interest all the way through. Amazing! Wonderful!! Thanks very much for your work.

wow!

another great one.....................no wonder it took so long in between stories! man, i reaaly appreciate the stories..........................from a 77 yr old goat!

Doc,
Romance, heroes, villains; another great read. Need to get the sand out of my eyes and relieve the crick in my neck. Keep up the good story telling.
James

What about the first kid???

You never mentioned the sex or name of the first kid for Jake.

A very long and drawn out story of love

Subtitle was appropriate. Storyline was convincing, but after about page 10 I started skipping sections.

I give you lots of credit for posting the whole story, I much prefer that even if not reading it in one setting versus HDK and others posting a chapter a week.

Pure Fiction

I got to say I really enjoy this story it was long, yes, but to those who said it was too long maybe you don't read many books. It gets on my goat when stories are pulled apart and criticized about how the characters speak, well I for one have never heard anybody who can speak PERFECT English, the world would have no accents.
Like the Author told you in the beginning its only a story, who cares if the Dr is surgeon at 25 and Jake is in high school at 18. If you want it to be perfect, stay away from this site because 100% truth just isn't here.
Well done Mr Moog keep them coming coz I is awaiting. LOL

Another great story!!!!

Wow! This story was so good. I loved every word of it, but of course, that's the way I feel about all of your work. Great Job!!!!!!!

Oh my God

I couldn't put my iPad down while reading this perfectly put together story! I know it was quite long, but that only made it better. I love all the action and the romance and suspense! I wish you'd make this into a book, it would do great! :)

Finally!!

Thank god its over.

Marshals didn't look very good

I very much enjoyed the music and romance aspects of this, as with your other stories. I've read just about all of them. I will have to say, though, that the U.S. Marshals didn't come out of this looking very good, as Jake had to keep doing their job for them!

Anter geat one..

Moog Plater, you have gone and written another story I could not put down without stopping... You are one of the best writers here.
Still say Literotica needs to put up 10 stars.
Myassisdragin

Simply Awesome!

MoogPlayer you've killed me! I'm not really bitching but my Masters thesis took a big time hit while I read this superbly written contribution you provided us.
I've thoroughly enjoyed all of your work but this was by far as the tag states the "romance novella" with erotica, some steamy to the point sex, girly ultra romance by the truck load and some action tossed in for fun. I'll keep coming back to check you out as long as you keep cranking out the same quality work!! BRAVO!!

Awesome and totally entertaining.

Involving fun read. Thoroughly involving love story with a lot of exttras and excitement. When you want a fantasy to read you get a special delivery from this talented. If you want reality it ain't here. Thanks MoogPlayer.

spent the last week reading everything of MoogPlayer's on this site.
saved this story till last due to its 43 pages .

Kinda sad now that i have read them all , each day i looked forward to banishing the world for a few hours , while i lost myself in the tales Moog created.

thankfully the Author has an extensive " Favorites " list ...
so over the next few days i will check them out , and see if i enjoy them as much.

thanks for sharing , thanks for caring.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

Please don't give up on me just yet

I've got some new stuff in the works, I just need a little more time to get it out. But like I said, Please don't give up on me just yet...I won't let ya'll down, I promise, okay?

MP

I am so glad I saved this 'til last!

Another superb tale Mr Moog! My eyes bugged out when I saw that it was forty-three pages - yet once I started it, I couldn't stop reading! I enjoy the love, romance and hot sex in your stories between the characters and their strengths and foibles. I'm writing my doctoral thesis at the moment, so when I get stuck with writer's block, I'll always be inspired by this amazing story. Every story is a gift especially with the music and songs of popular songs that you include. In this story you've inserted two of my favourites - Bread's "Everything I own" and The Association's "Never my love" as the story's title. When I read your stories I always listen to the songs you write about on YouTube at the same time. Here's a version of "Never my love" from Har Mar Superstar from the soundtrack of Drew Barrymore's film "Whip it". Go well and I look forward to many more exceptional writings from you xoxoxo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fslOF4Qu0C8

sweet and syrupy

HooYah! Just another great romance story with a good touch of adventure. You have a good fan of this 77 year old vet. Gonna see about the books also. Thank you for some great entertainment. Bob

Great story

My wife's romance novels have more detailed sex scenes but I appreciate the effort you put into plot and character development. You need to write in Word so you can spelllcheck and grammar check. I think you can save it as a text file or a webpage and paste it.

Once again....

You have written another great story!

I have read and enjoyed most all of your writings, save just a few with less than ideal endings. Jmho.

Please, keep writing, as many of us are thoroughly enjoying them!

JR

love it

I really love your stories.this is. Another great one.you are my favorite author in this site.God bless your work.love it sooooo muuuuuch

Love it

Not every day you get a good chunk to chew on and this is one of the best I have read

never my love!

This is a wonderful story easily worth 10 stars but I must have voted before. I have read all the stories but one starting at the top of the list to here voted when allowed but this the only comment this time through. I will comment again at the end. also could you give me your real or pen name so I can look for your books, there are several by different authors?
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

a very enjoyable read as it went along

at a cracking pace...just one thing...you really need to proof read your work as far too many spelling and grammar mistakes .....otherwise a very good story....though never too sure about including pop stars etc as then it gets way beyond the realms of fantasy...