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Gavin Screws Up

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by josephstevens07/21/13

Bit Different!

So much 'samey' stuff on here...this is a refreshing change. Nice short story..and the first of a series...?

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by GemmaRaphael07/21/13

Thanks Joseph!

You've warmed my heart by saying something nice about my first ever story - thank you. Yes, it's the first in a series. The whole thing should be up within a couple of weeks.

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