All Comments on 'Volunteer Work Ch. 04'

You switch from past tense to present tense, which is distracting. Keep on writing!

I don't know why everyone has been so critical of this series, it's beautiful, sensitive and has a great build up. I keep seeing anonymous comments bemoaning the most inconsequential things like chapter length and tenses. Half of these nitpickers probably don't even contribute as writers and have no right to demand changes in your style or quicker updates to the story. I think your stories are wonderful and ypu have every right take your time with the updates and plot - ignore these childish gripers who clearly have no idea how much thought goes into a good love story.

I like the realistic build up you've been creating between these two. Keep writing:)

More!!

Can u tell me if there is a part 5 to this story.I hope both women can hopefully build they friendship first .b4 they become lovers.a very good story from start to finish.has to people found of that they r more then just friends.but she takes her time to tell the other women how she feels about her.I am happy they both fall 4 eatch other in the end .good luck to u both.I hope yr friendship has lovers grow to what u want it to be 4 u both

I loved this four chapter series but where's the rest? It was just getting to the juicy stuff and now nothing. Feeling sad 😞.