I loved the way you told this story it was very entertaining . hope you do some more .
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Anonymous07/21/13
Very Good
Sexy and funny at the same time . More please !
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Anonymous07/21/13
Hot!
Loved it... reminds me of how I teased my daddy into fucking me when I was home from college ;). When I got pregnant I just told mom I had a mistake at a college party... but he knew! :D
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Anonymous07/21/13
a great story
It's up to dad to bust his little girl's cherry. When dad's not available, it's the job of her big brother. The first blast of creamy semen up a girl's cute little cunt should be family semen.
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Anonymous08/14/13
Cool
That was a fantastic story.Thanks for the great tease
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Anonymous08/19/13
SLUTTY AND HORNY
AHHHH YESSSS
WHAT A GREAT STORY
IM SOOOO HOTTT AND WETT NOW
NEED TO GET FUCKED LIKE A WHORE
I did like your style, so refreshing and different.
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Anonymous02/04/14
Are You A Virgin?
This story sounds like it was written by someone who has had no experience with sex. Like a twelve year old wrote it. It was difficult to finish it because I couldn't stop laughing. On a side note.... If you're going to write a story, it helps to have something other than dialogue.Yikes.
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Anonymous03/27/14
STORY WAS MEANT TO BE HILARIOUS!
TO THE ANONYMOUS COMMENTATOR THAT SAID IF THE STORY WAS WRITTEN BY A KID AND IF THEY'RE A VIRGIN, THAT SAID VERY NAIVE AND WRONG. IT WAS MEANT TO BE TOLD THIS WAY.
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Anonymous07/03/14
PLEASE WAIT until I can get get the tears out of my eyes.......and I can get the laughter out.....
...out of my voice before I can comment on the most beautifully written piece of
SEXY COMEDY even submitted to Literotica in the past. This was an gem!.
English
Outstanding
Keep up the story. I hope Part 2 cums soon just like me.
GAHHHHHHH!
Great story. It's a departure from your usual stories, but I love the dialog. I can't wait for Kelly, Julie, and Daddy.
Fun Fun Fun!
Great story, Slam. I love the dialogue. As always, you be da man!
GREAT
I loved the way you told this story it was very entertaining . hope you do some more .
Very Good
Sexy and funny at the same time . More please !
Hot!
Loved it... reminds me of how I teased my daddy into fucking me when I was home from college ;). When I got pregnant I just told mom I had a mistake at a college party... but he knew! :D
a great story
It's up to dad to bust his little girl's cherry. When dad's not available, it's the job of her big brother. The first blast of creamy semen up a girl's cute little cunt should be family semen.
Cool
That was a fantastic story.Thanks for the great tease
SLUTTY AND HORNY
AHHHH YESSSS
WHAT A GREAT STORY
IM SOOOO HOTTT AND WETT NOW
NEED TO GET FUCKED LIKE A WHORE
Now that was class !
I did like your style, so refreshing and different.
Are You A Virgin?
This story sounds like it was written by someone who has had no experience with sex. Like a twelve year old wrote it. It was difficult to finish it because I couldn't stop laughing. On a side note.... If you're going to write a story, it helps to have something other than dialogue.Yikes.
STORY WAS MEANT TO BE HILARIOUS!
TO THE ANONYMOUS COMMENTATOR THAT SAID IF THE STORY WAS WRITTEN BY A KID AND IF THEY'RE A VIRGIN, THAT SAID VERY NAIVE AND WRONG. IT WAS MEANT TO BE TOLD THIS WAY.
PLEASE WAIT until I can get get the tears out of my eyes.......and I can get the laughter out.....
...out of my voice before I can comment on the most beautifully written piece of
SEXY COMEDY even submitted to Literotica in the past. This was an gem!.
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